Student gets arrested after submitting Creative Writing Assignment

Ponytail

New Member
http://www.cnn.com/2007/US/04/27/student.essay.arrest.ap/index.html

This pizzes me off. Society has gone absolutely mad. I'm trying to find the essay to read the entire thing. It sounds like it could actually be a pretty good read.

And now the kid faces 30 days in jail. Ridiculous!

Good think Edgar Allen Poe wasn't writing in this day and age. We'd never have experienced that mans mind, or a mess of others that wrote from their world of dimentia that was their creative minds.
 

Christy

b*tch rocket
Ponytail said:
http://www.cnn.com/2007/US/04/27/student.essay.arrest.ap/index.html

This pizzes me off. Society has gone absolutely mad. I'm trying to find the essay to read the entire thing. It sounds like it could actually be a pretty good read.

And now the kid faces 30 days in jail. Ridiculous!

Good think Edgar Allen Poe wasn't writing in this day and age. We'd never have experienced that mans mind, or a mess of others that wrote from their world of dimentia that was their creative minds.

I agree. If this ridiculousness was around when I was growing up, I'd have been locked up. My mom still has a paper I wrote in third grade, which I received an A on but the teacher wrote "Christy this a very good story, although a bit gory". But hey, it was a story for Halloween. :shrug:
 

Nickel

curiouser and curiouser
Hmmm...so Bret Easton Ellis writes books that are far worse than I'm sure this essay is, and they turn them into movies. This poor kid gets arrested. :ohwell:
 

Sharon

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Staff member
PREMO Member
Students were told to "write whatever comes to your mind. Do not judge or censor what you are writing," according to a copy of the assignment.

Here's a straight A student who's never been disciplined in school. He turns in his assignment. What's the problem?


Oh yeah, he got arrested because they didn't like the content of his paper. :rolleyes:
 

bcp

In My Opinion
I got a week vacation once for a like situation.
we had to write a short story to be read to the class.
the teacher was in her mid 20s and hot.. real hot.

sooooo,, I did a short story that had the tone of one of those romance novels that women like to read, only it was me boinking the teacher.


school administrators did not find the humor in it at all.. well, one did, but, as he was agreeing that he would also not pass the chance up,, he was also explaining why I had to go away for a week.


Mom was not impressed with my story telling skills.. they sent it home for her to read.

let me add that this was also the day that I discovered that I was a filthy animal.
 

willie

Well-Known Member
quote:
• Class was told to write whatever came to mind, without censoring their thoughts
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CARY, Illinois (AP) -- A high school senior was arrested after writing that "it would be funny" to dream about opening fire in a building and having sex with the dead victims, authorities said.

I don't want him in my neighborhood.
 

johnycarcinogen

New Member
Blood, sex and booze.

I bet they will now blame Green Day because that is the name of one of their songs, and lyrics in the song. Just as blame was attempted to be put on M.Manson If the guy is told he can write whatever he wants, then that is what is allowed. IMHO
 

johnycarcinogen

New Member
willie said:
quote:
• Class was told to write whatever came to mind, without censoring their thoughts
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CARY, Illinois (AP) -- A high school senior was arrested after writing that "it would be funny" to dream about opening fire in a building and having sex with the dead victims, authorities said.

I don't want him in my neighborhood.

honestly, first thing that came to my mind when I read this....this guy was just trying to get a rise out of people after the recent events at VT. Not a very good idea, but that may be a possibility.
 

vraiblonde

Board Mommy
PREMO Member
Patron
Twisted kid, but arrested for disorderly conduct - for writing something?????

Quentin Tarantino better watch his back.
 

2ndAmendment

Just a forgiven sinner
PREMO Member
Sharon said:
Here's a straight A student who's never been disciplined in school. He turns in his assignment. What's the problem?


Oh yeah, he got arrested because they didn't like the content of his paper. :rolleyes:
I wonder if the school or those that arrested him have ever heard of the U.S. Constitution or the First Amendment.

Those of you that think oppression can't happen here better wake up. You better go exercise your Second Amendment rights and keep arms even if you don't want to bear them right now. You might just need them at a date to be determined.
 
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StrwberryKisses

Guest
Was there not a similar issue with a paper that the VT shooting kid wrote? I thought the police talked with his creative writing teacher and she said something about content like that was frowned upon.

With everything that just happen why would the student even write that. He should have thought to him self "hey could this be taken the wrong way." Its just like speaking you much think before you write some times.

I'm not defending what action was taken against the kid or anything I mean yes it should be looked into but is expulsion and ruining his future really something to do over a simple assignment.
 

Merlin99

Visualize whirled peas
PREMO Member
If your going to tell them write what they want, no boundaries and to exaggerate, why would you be surprised with the results?
 

OldBlackTooth

Sixty-watt Shaman
Good lord it's easy to piss people off these days. I mean, granted, writing something of that caliber while the smokes still hanging over V-tech shows a supreme lack of tact, but it was the assignment, and he did it. I wrote some bizarre and morbid material myself in my creative writing classes and never saw any graff for it. In fact, some of them were among the better ones I turned in, because it's what I know, and well...it had a point. I'd like to actually read the whole thing, I don't exactly trust disjointed snippets and media spin, but from what they showed of his paper...Meh. Just seemed a bit, well....####ty. I guess I shouldn't be passing judgement on the kids writing but come on, it's just cookie-cutter death metal lyrical content with something a little more relevant and recent thrown in to piss off whoever's looking to be mad. To call it some kind of precursor to a school shooting is a little over the top, though. Bret Easton Ellis wrote American Psycho, yet he's not in jail for murdering droves of prostitutes, just like this kid probably won't end up in jail on homicide. There are lines between fiction and reality and honestly...who here wouldn't have some kid in mind if they'd heard back in high school that the place got shot up? There are signs, and at V-tech everyone ignored them. And I wonder who sold a gun to a kid with a history of mental illness and problems with stalking? Oh, yeah, virginia's not really down with the mandatory background checks. Go figure. We don't need better gun control laws or anything like that, keep your guns, I'll keep mine, we just need merchants to show a bit of sense. If you can't catch that sort of vibe from a person who's pretty obviously cracked than maybe you're in the wrong business, man. I'd hate to be guy sitting on a couple hundred bucks of blood money, legitimate dealer or not. Maybe there's something I'm missing, and if so, I'd like to have my facts straight, but seems like it's relatively easy to come by firearms, licitly or non, and kids die. At v-tech, at wa-wa and the Landings and anywhere else in my hometown that ten years ago was a pretty great place to live. It still is, but man, the hell happenned to the park? I worry more about armed idiots down here with something to prove than I ever really did living in Brawltimore. Thugs down here think they're the hardest thing since Pablo Escobar, and will go to very stupid lengthes to make sure you know. The only thing harder than a St Mary's County thug is apparently passing high school.
 
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