Prison Doc Accused Of Fondling Inmates Killed By Train

Larry Gude

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I thought it was a story about a doctor who was fondling the corpses of inmates who were killed by a train.
 

2ndAmendment

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Larry Gude said:
I thought it was a story about a doctor who was fondling the corpses of inmates who were killed by a train.
Punctuation is your friend.

Prison Doc, Accused Of Fondling Inmates, Killed By Train.
 

RoseRed

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2ndAmendment said:
Punctuation is your friend.

Prison Doc, Accused Of Fondling Inmates, Killed By Train.
It was copied and pasted from the link. Bad reporter. :nono:
 

2ndAmendment

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RoseRed said:
It was copied and pasted from the link. Bad reporter. :nono:
Most reporters are bad these days; they don't check facts, they don't use proper English, they express their opinion as news, they taint the story with their opinion. Generalizing, reporters, car sales people, mortgage brokers, real estate agents, politicians, lawyers; I think that about covers it; are in the same class of trust.
 

RoseRed

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2ndAmendment said:
Most reporters are bad these days; they don't check facts, they don't use proper English, they express their opinion as news, they taint the story with their opinion. Generalizing, reporters, car sales people, mortgage brokers, real estate agents, politicians, lawyers; I think that about covers it; are in the same class of trust.

:spindoctors: :yay:
 

RoseRed

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2ndAmendment said:
:yay: I was thinking a bit more terse, but that is the idea.
:yay:
 

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